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BREATHING IN and BREATHING OUT

posted Saturday, 3 May 2008
 
BREATHING IN
 
 
THE TEASING LEAVES
 
 
IF WISHES WERE HORSES BEGGARS WOULD RIDE
 
 
MY SALTY TONGUE GIRLS
 
 
RAINDROPS KEEP FALLING ON MY HEAD
 
 
 
BREATHING IN and BREATHING OUT

Out into the hood
I walk the darkened stairs.
The leaves of the trees tease me
with their beauty.
My hungry camera devours them
as I walk the streets
hunting the images.
Game is scarce in the rain
even the most persistent homeless beggars
are under cover.
The hood is one large construction zone
as the gentrification process
takes its toll on the hood.
Can a McDonalds be far behind
the encroachment of a Starbucks?
While the living hood is still
breathing in and breathing out.

JWL

 
 
ITS A DOG'S LIFE
 
 
BREATHING OUT
 
Ciao, JWL 




1. billy willbond left...
Saturday, 3 May 2008 1:33 pm

I so love the pictures that you take in the rain - human beings with their faces cleansed of dirt and of pain - If beggars rode horses they'd both poop on the street - best to keep the former upright upon his 2 feet - with grocery cart and puppy dog to carry bedroll and a largepack- b&e's in the night to feed another needle track - The leaves and the girls have a beauty of their own as you take wonderful pictures around a hood you call home-be well my old friend-billy


2. Mary Blu left...
Sunday, 4 May 2008 3:04 am :: http://mindtravels.wordpress.com/

Each photo has it's own story as does each individual that walks the earth. Even in the down side of fall when the earth begins to dry up and darken with the decay of time gone by, therein lies hope of rejuvination to come as the browns and grays hide what was and what will some day be.


3. kenneth Durrer left...
Sunday, 4 May 2008 5:53 am

sunday greetings, old boy! have finally gotten around to this. don't know what to make of your poem yet- the symbolism & metphorical structure are complex. saw Anthony Holland many years ago as Shylock in a very impressive production of " Merchant of.." he was hugely powerful.I make my spaghetti somewhat differently. hope you like our stew later on today. cheers, K.8


4. catty left...
Sunday, 4 May 2008 10:09 am :: http://savetheamericanfamily.blog-city.c

A feast for the eyes as well as the mind. I really like the pauper giving his furry prince a ride.